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One Deep Breath prompt of the week: Dirt.  Haiku about getting clean, or getting muddy. In this part of the world,  getting dirty means getting sweaty, and that made me think of the beach.

So very sweaty
Lying on the sticky sand
Wrapped in sun.

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One Deep Breath sugiere que escribamos haiku sobre el barro, la tierra, la suciedad. Eso me hizo pensar en sudor, y por extensión en la playa. Un haiku playero:

Tan sudorosa
Tumbada en la arena
envuelta en sol.

05/03/2007 19:25 Autor: Eugenia Andino. Link me // Enlace directo. Tema: My Poetry.

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Autor: Brian

I love the line wrapped in sun. Perfect.

Fecha: 07/03/2007 01:23.


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Autor: Patricia (a/k/a Roswila)

Wonderful and different slant on the prompt. The third line is amazing.

Fecha: 07/03/2007 05:10.


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Autor: Crafty Green Poet

This is a wonderful sunbathing haiku! Especially the last line!

Fecha: 07/03/2007 09:21.



Autor: La Guiri

Thanks a lot, everyone! You need to lie for a few hours in the sun of Southern Spain to understand how you can be wrapped in sun, I think ;)

Fecha: 07/03/2007 10:03.


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Autor: Sandy

Another form of dirt. Great. Right now, I would love to be wrapped in sun!!!

Fecha: 07/03/2007 16:28.


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Autor: 1blkquill

I felt like I was at the beach, all hot, salty, and full of sand.

Fecha: 07/03/2007 22:13.


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