Dirt

One Deep Breath prompt of the week: Dirt.  Haiku about getting clean, or getting muddy. In this part of the world,  getting dirty means getting sweaty, and that made me think of the beach.

So very sweaty
Lying on the sticky sand
Wrapped in sun.

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One Deep Breath sugiere que escribamos haiku sobre el barro, la tierra, la suciedad. Eso me hizo pensar en sudor, y por extensión en la playa. Un haiku playero:

Tan sudorosa
Tumbada en la arena
envuelta en sol.

6 comentarios

[1blkquill - 07 de marzo de 2007 - 22:13]

I felt like I was at the beach, all hot, salty, and full of sand.

[Sandy - 07 de marzo de 2007 - 16:28]

Another form of dirt. Great. Right now, I would love to be wrapped in sun!!!

[La Guiri - 07 de marzo de 2007 - 10:03]

Thanks a lot, everyone! You need to lie for a few hours in the sun of Southern Spain to understand how you can be wrapped in sun, I think ;)

[Crafty Green Poet - 07 de marzo de 2007 - 09:21]

This is a wonderful sunbathing haiku! Especially the last line!

[Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) - 07 de marzo de 2007 - 05:10]

Wonderful and different slant on the prompt. The third line is amazing.

[Brian - 07 de marzo de 2007 - 01:23]

I love the line wrapped in sun. Perfect.