Calm and stillness

Ni mar ni río
La piscina del vecino
Nos arrulla.

Neither sea or river
The neighbour's swimming-pool
is our lullaby.

Written for One Deep Breath, whose prompt this week was calm and stillness.

5 comentarios

[Crafty Green Poet - 19 de marzo de 2007 - 10:48]

I like this, its modern and thoughtful.

[Pearl - 18 de marzo de 2007 - 17:40]

Huh, that's cool. I like that making the built environment the same niche as the natural.

[jemima - 18 de marzo de 2007 - 15:05]

Beautiful music in both versions :-)

[Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) - 15 de marzo de 2007 - 06:04]

Oh, yes, wonderful. Water in almost any shape can be very calming.

[n.b. - 15 de marzo de 2007 - 03:26]

Wow, I love the contemporary yet timeless subject matter!